My final paper looks much better than my rough draft. I went into a lot more detail about my tutor and teacher that I wrote about. I made a lot of revisions in content and sentence structure.
After revising my rough draft I was able to see what my peer reviewer was suggesting I did to make my paper much better, by adding details of my surroundings and using better descriptive words.
The peer review guided me to write better because after reading the paper that I was peer reviewing I was kind of embarrassed in how poorly I had written mine, it kind of motivated me to take some time and regroup my thoughts.
I think my introduction and thesis were probably the best aspect of my paper because that is the part I spent the most time on but it always takes me a while to start a paper.
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